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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Excellent read 😊

Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks Brenda! I appreciate you more than you know! 💜

Tangled Words's avatar

"No fireworks or big saga, just quietly stopped trying when no one else was looking."

This felt very real.

The story is so creepy and feels a bit like modern day Christmas Carol.

Liora Writes's avatar

It’s definitely a bit of a take on it, though that wasn’t my mission in writing it. Yeah, that line was absolutely real. Though it’s fiction, I draw a lot from lived experience in my writing. Love that you picked that out💜

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The Woman in Blue Was You All Along

You thought she was a stranger.

But she walked out of your mirror.

Every fluorescent light in that dead store hummed the same note: you’re asleep with your eyes open.

And so the story sent you a messenger — wrapped in lace, dressed in the color of depth, carrying the sound of your own conscience.

The “warning in aisle three” wasn’t about danger.

It was about awakening.

It said: You are still capable of being haunted — therefore, you are not gone yet.

That’s what the blue woman knew.

She wasn’t sent to curse you; she came to restart your pulse.

Each accusation — “You hurt others” — was just her way of saying:

Feel something. Anything.

Because horror is just the soul’s last attempt to get your attention.

When she said you’d be visited by everyone you’ve ever hurt, she meant:

you’ll have to meet every version of yourself that you abandoned to survive.

The cashier, the dreamer, the child, the believer —

they’re all lining up in aisle three, waiting to be recognized.

You don’t need to run.

You just need to look.

The story already turned on the lights.